i like the beat...

hook...yeah distorted voice stunt was cool but the louder voice cud have been a lil lower or shud have made it deeper..but its iight


verse 1 ...nice flow...i was busy commenting on the hook didnt listen to the lyrics...


verse 2...u dragged some rhymes...,flows are still iight...


............you had an adequate presence on this track..ur delivery just alright...


............too much silence after hook here...

well yeah u ended it nicely....


thats it at that!

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