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Old 08-10-03, 01:52 PM   #4
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I suppose I should give you a good responce then, huh?

your flow was on point, even if you didn't break up some of the bars, and broke up others.
the wordplay was as usual. (of the fo shizzle, gankstuh!)
you brought out a sense of hopelessness, as well as promoting yourself and your generation.
It was a sort of "Yeah, we have no where to go but down. Fuck you too".
If I'm getting it right.

best lines:
The meaning of life?
A Calendar. all our Days are Numbered

we had a date with Destiny,
and slammed the door in her face!

what i pen speaks for itself. . although im amazing with verbs,
infact, ive not had a relationship last since i Played On Words!


those really stood out, but the whole piece was phenominal.
I'd nominate it for a legend, but you already have like 20 in there

oh, and check out my collab with flipnautix, called shadows of doubt

peace
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