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Old 10-09-04, 06:40 PM   #11
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Phenom :

Paramik Was Weary Of This Battle,Who Could Blaim Him
Flow In Instant Messengers Only Time Ya Punches R AIM'n

^^a lil blahh...but iight wordplay


Computers Best Friend, Just Another Internet Groupie
Ya Avatar Is Self Explanitary net Geek, Buddys Are 2D


^^nice

Ill Para-Lize Ya MiK..Was Already Impossible To Win This
Tourny Is Urs, But Im Afraid No Rap In The Para-Lympic

^^i liked that gd gd...

I'd Give You A Win Outta Sympathy, It Won't Be Belived
Unthinkable, How Can I Be Beat By A Spider Man-Geek


^^lol........nice...tight closer...


Paramik :

Verbal Phenom cant lyrically spit venom cause it aint a verb…
Cause the way ya venom flows…. easily gets cured by a herb.
So you can call me apothecary, the way im removing ya venom.
Might as well call him anthrax…..
………………………………the way the poison letters stopped sendin’

^^nice...but sweetie u stretched a lot..i mean ukept on talkin about the venom in 5 lines...


Fact is this kid’s not even important, VP’s the VP without the I.
Joined the newbie bashing crew, proves this kid’s not a wise guy.

^^first line had me sayin....ughhh this aint paramik...but the second 1 was a lil better


This kid is lines are a joke, I didn't really need to post a verse.
The crowd woudn't feel your flow if they were dieing of thirst.


^^i went .....hmm on d first line..but the second 1 had me smilin...

Another fag battling me, he always so proud about getting beat.
I mean who places shit in their sig, like a link to their Defeat?

^^first of all u cant call that battle a defeat cos its still open...it could be his victory...and second of all...i wasnt really feelin ur closer...



both keyed on here i can tell........cos both usualy burn the screen with ur hotness...but phenom,besides the quick shit he dropped,gets this...cos his lines kept on flowin and were better structured with better wordplay..personals and punches...his lines werent stretched too...which gives him another plus....so ima just end up sayin my vote gose to phenom...


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