polls brother.
your verse was enjoyable..i like the way u went upod selling it to the reader. Your flow was on point as always due to the multi rhyme scheme you used. Though i think sometimes because of that certain rhyme scheme with shorter verses its harder to get your meaning out as much as you wanted to. Which i thought was happening here..but you wrapped it up nice in the last line...over all a good piece should be enough to win it bro.
deadly...seemed you clashed topicals and text battle...lol seemse u tried to diss your opponent? thats kind of weird to see in a topical battle..i felt your verse lacked a lot of anything in topical standards though your last 2 lines i thought made your verse go from whack ..to meh...so just try and stay on topic..establish a flow and try and get some if not imagery..get emotion..because flow and emotion can really sell a verse man...just keep that in mind and keep elevatin.
props S.V. ..you big bad chrymie you
