Voted For: Lay-Text

BQ- alright girl you did good for your first topical. Good balance of vocab. The emotion needs to be upp. The Imaginary of this verse was ok, still need to elevate on that, it was average not great nor weak. I say add some meta'z and put some feelings to it...but it's an ok drop. GOOD JOB.

R-Rated. alright, this was a decent drop here. I like your imaginary and the approach you took in your verse. The emotion is what i was so eagar to look for. But there wasn't none.

CONCLUSION= This battle to me is one-sided, i'mma vote for imaginary here. There was weak of emotion in both verse, elevate. BQ You had good imaginary but it was lacking details, i mean more details, your verse wasn't clearer. R-RATED you had a good verse man nice imaginary, i like your approach and you had more details in your imaginary so that's why I'm voting for you.

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