This was seriously dope on the real
Topic was original and you stuck to it greatly
Loved the metaphors used in this and the ending was, pretty much, poetic
Flow was nice and diggin the vocab
Also, your imagery is vivid, well done on that

Stand out lines;

But this deep fog is a mystery as my silhouette plows through it

Wondering for a fraction of a second if my footprints remember me

Stop and wet my face in a puddle, wondering what I'm becoming.
Wait for water to settle to see my reflection. It does... I see nothing.