A nice conscious drop by you right here...

The topic allowed you to took many approaches, yours might not have been the most original one but you managed to write an insightful piece. The vocabulary was excellent in my opinion, flow was right on as well. Strongest aspect was the sort of conscious emotion, a kind of wisdom you delivered in fact. You also used some clear pictures to describe everything but the emotion of the story and such was the best in my opinion.

Keep it up

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