This piece was composed descent. It wasn't bad at all, but I believe the wording and vocab usage could be inserted a little better to bring out the overall depth of the piece. I felt at times you kinda forced in a rhyme schema because you couldn't think of something to rhyme with the previous line. Other than that, this is an okayish piece....

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