hmm..you can leave feed on my piece, its right below yours.

The rhyme scheme was pretty basic,..topic was okay, it got a tad repetitive in a short amount of time..like I knew somethin about her dead was coming cuz you kept droppin hints, it was okay. It would had been better if you made it longer, it was too short to get into imo. Still, decent piece. keep writing

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