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Old 06-09-05, 01:03 AM   #10
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wow, lmfao, nice closer i was feelin the personal take...
couple really effective bars n none that got me bored shit was nice to read, solid drop. you stayed on topic n did it well..nice drop
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BQ-, i liked alot of ya lines that stayed on topic n i feel if you had gone up against some1 that doesnt write as well as lay text in topicasl form you wouldve pulled away with the win
but you had your verse stray away from the topic which was a huge disadvantage...try not to ramble on (middle verse)
nontheless i liked your closer, it was a koo thought...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!