Voted For: Lay-Text

v/lay text

black queen
has beutiful flow and vocab,the imagery was quite vivid, with some decent emotion,however it just seemed you werent that far on topic....i felt you could have done a better job with this,however dont get me wrong i think ytou are quite a good writer.....keep your head up

laytext
the emotion was strong in this piece you connected your words with the reality of hip hop nicely,the flow was decent, you had a more creative aproach to the topic,and i just felt you came more better and on a more real basis

overall both great pieces and worth the read, however for the following reasons

my vote goes to Lay-Text

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