damn this was close.....too damn close for my tastes....wqhy couldnt one of you be wack? ok, breakdown:

contents poem came off as a huge jumble of imagery with a general feling of anger/discontent. complex vocab which sometimes defied understanding. overall was good stuff.

necro's was a lot more conventional and down to earth kind of anger, easier to understand, good imagery, the vocab was simpler BUT it had one excellentline which just made my jaw drop.

"I'm a mime on the phone, Or a cardboard box for a home"

good lord!^^

so after much consideration....











vote- The Necromancer

great work both of you.