i think you should leave the rain and thunder in for the first 2 verses,thean fade it out and change the rhythem of the piano at the end like in the begining of the song you was fealing suisidal
thean on the third verse shit got better for you so theres no more rain make it sound happier at the end...but this beat needs an orchastraited background,violins,trumpets,horns,harps,etc..
that'll be your base for the beat and towards the end like i said just have the piano change up and leave it by its self with nothing else for the end...but its early were im at and i just got up not to long ago so my mind ain't working that great yet,,but thats my opinion....im also known as micrippa...i make beatz myself..like india sorrow,headknock shit,but try that homie..peace