WoW.........

Suprised by baron, this was a nice battle........

Baron.
A very deep,emotional piece about your grandmother
the imagery was great, and your rhyme scheme was spot on
I loved the way you got the reader involved in to the story
...a very heart felt piece........props

Deacon.
Holy christ that was fucking mesmorizing....
great story and concept, with brilliantly vivid imagery
the words wrapped around my tongue and choked it....
...that is the only way i feel i can describe it....
I felt every inch of movement and emotion running through that
piece.....great stuff..
Props

Well, two great piece's but i felt deacon took this....
Baron's was fuckin brilliant...but deacons showed
his craftsmanship with feelings and imagery...and was mesmorizing
Therefore i vote Deacon.....Massive props to both