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Old 12-26-05, 03:33 PM   #14
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Rev-YOUR verse was exceptionaly long like fuck you. I read it all....it had some good emotion and good storyline. I loved how you worked on ur concept. Good point of view. You had ok imagery but could have been longer. It was mad long and you werent exactly consistant with your dopeness.....good job though 8/10.l

Sapp..-lol, ur verse was fucking amazing..you had an extroidanary piece...your imagery and emotion was undescribale...best piece ive seen in a while, you had a nice story line that was on topic and creative the whole way through. Nice piece....overall 8.5/10

this was a dope battle, good job to both of you...but for having a dope yet shorter piece.....vote to Sapp......word.
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