weerd
im glad to see the singers actually good
most of the time when i peep tracks with "singers" in them, they are always half assed pieces of shit
cream actually pretty nice
props to him

beats not suttin id really do, but it aint that bad..
im liking your flow, the cream dubs were nice..
lyrics is str8
coo lil concept you got for this track..im suprised i aint think of it
your emotion/delivery is pretty much perfect, but since this is kinda a slower ladies hit type track...you should try and add a lil more charisma to your track, or jus a lil suttin more that would get the ladies like "oooh hes seeeexay" lol...
thats really my only complaint, up the charisma on the ladies track..

quality shit man, real nice...

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