Word.. This shit is creative.. It aint weird, cause rap is expression not supposed to be generic gangsta shit.. But.............Whats with using eminems lyrics in the start of the second verse lol.. I'm positive I've heard that stuff before.. Maybe switched it up a bit on purpose?

Also I think you kinda rapped too quiet and just raised the levels.. But overall it was a pretty good n interesting track.

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