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Old 05-29-05, 12:27 PM   #8
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Drive to your 9 to 5…and sing along to the radio…sorry to break your heart fool
Not talking bout the Network, when I say as far as you’ll get in rap is Car-Toons
5...decent wordplay, but the punch was lacking really, and the whole car-toons/ car tunes concept i have seen used before!!
You want Publicity? Sorry, you’ll never get it in music…so switch grinds
Getting smacked with Cordoroy Pillows is the only way you’ll make HeadLines
6...better, the 2nd line was funny but a different approach to the whole concept cud've made it better!!
HotShh is a fake son...Honesty isnt exceeding in his catagories of Fire B
Thats why he sits on top of Pinnochios face...and yells out "Lie To Me"
8...LMFAO!!!! an original idea and it was fuckin hilarious to!!!
Hotshh is wack and that’s that…he seems so hopeless if you’ll notice
persue your dreams Hot, and end up like lice on bald men…homeless
5...nah!! the multies were nice but the punch itself was not affective, also unless he specifically said "he wants to be homeless" it seems more of a fake personal than a punch!!
Son attends counseling...admitting his RV problems; "Marv's Gay" he boasts
im sorry to inform you..Hard-Ons from Marv's beef doesnt count as personal growth
7...kind of a played concept but the whole comic shit about it made it a dope line!!
Read Hot's Shh backwards..he's about to come clean cause every man should
Hot uses the best TacTics on RV!..i mean he's Dislexic..but his Breathe smells Damn Good!
7...LMAO!!!! a dope closer, the tactics/tic tacs line was creative!!!

OVERALL: 38/60 (63.3%)



As I Begin to Merk You, stop your flows til your Skin is Purple
Edit ya Title......... You're now "Outside of the Winners Circle"
6...decent personal, but the 1st line wasn't all that good!!
Your skill is low in text, couldnt 'deal a king' if you Load the Deck
Your in a "field" of "danger" ....even Rodney show you No Respect
6...another nice punch, but the vocabs are pretty basic!!
U'll leave this round with no fame just ashamed and Embarrassed
Check your rank, Willy...only your CREW name is "Established"
5...not feelin this bar, the setup was kinda bleh!! and the 2nd part to the bar has been done before!!
And thats no dissing on your clique, it aint nothing they Provoked
Just the fact they let you in..... proves that they can 'Take a Joke'
7...LoL!!! this was a nice bar, the 2nd part to it made me laugh!!
Why you gloating on that shitty verse for Common you Posted
You dont invent, U "Invek" and take the credit when he Wrote It*
7...a nice personal, some better lines from you!!
So whether its Genocide...... Lucifer..... Wet Willy or Buddha
We wont stop at RB, soon you'll be banned from your Computer
6...this line seems kinda rushed to me, and it is a similar idea to something i have seen before, just with a new twist on it!!
So if Willy say he "dropped fire"....... he's Replacing Employers
You couldnt take "a tourney" home... if you was Dating a Lawyer!
7...decent wordplay, the first line kinda played, but the 2nd line was dope!!

OVERALL: 44/70 (62.8%)


now that is a close battle!!!!
but overall i think will took it by a fraction for having a couple of real nice lines, hotssh was consistent but had nuthin that really jumped out at me and made me think "yea, that was fuckin dope and original!"

V/ - Wet Willy
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