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As Seen On T.V.
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IP:
vote: anxiety
best lines:
If i knew the answer, then i would hate what im given...
Because i dont want anything, to change how im livin...
the imagery was good, the flow was perfect.
struct was good, i dont see anything wrong
with your key, it was keen. congrats. DQ i
also ejoyed yours, i was just feeling anxiety's
lines a bit more on this one. both good verses.
going with anxiety.
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