Ingenius- your peice was alright, but nothing really stood out about it exept your feelings. By that, I mean your rhyme scheme wasn't what it could've been, vocab wasn't there... you had strong feelings though... and that told a story by itself... but the story it told was one that I've heard millions of times in every poem I've read by a female.

Enygma- yours was ok... i mean... but if you hated him so much what diffrence does it make that he was good at bowling & pool? He was soooooo good with children that he left you... really, there's nothing to be envied. Showed good emotion though... rhyme scheme was weak...

I think this battle could go either way. Both had some major flaws in their verses, Ingenius Mind's was played and she needed to up her vocab .Enygma's just didn't really stick to the topic exept at the end, his hate for his dad overshadowed what he was envious of and it made the "Envious" part not make too much sense... his verse was original though, i'll give him that.

v/ Enygma

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