wordz ahgod-- this was kinda simplistic, no real complex rhyme scheme, no inners which made the flow below averageor any complex vocabulary either. The concept was definitely done to death. and the story wasn't developed enough. sorry man

lampejo -i think i left feed on this on rb, but it wasn't that amazing. the font was tough to read and the rhyme scheme was even weaker than wordz'z.. but luckily you used the topic a lot better than he did, and you incorporated some good vocabulary and metaphors... so

vote - lamp

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