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Old 07-31-04, 03:06 PM   #14
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this kid hasta play an instrumental, n carry da speaker so he can “hold dope beats”,
ya burned n di’en today~burried in my driveway~so you can really~’RIP in streets’,
not a bad start preety good,

10 lines or less learn how‘cells-split’get taken out with ease by da knees wit cleats,
this kids ass n style reeks, weak bladder leaks so his “cell’s” sportin plastic sheets,
decent diss, and preety funny

your really just ~ tight when ya crap ~ cause honestly kid ~ rap is what you lack,
you must ~ write when jackin-off ~ cause you believe you ~ nice when you wack,
decent but not hard hitting....

I roll this ”herbs” life, sendin him ta da afterlife, while im dicking his sis with a knife,
Shoulda”sliced ya brain in two”n “thought twice”cuzz now imma start sticking ya wife,
um ok but remeber its a battle get at him more but this was ok....

This kid uses a “sten-cil” ta write rap n then names himself after bodies inner anatomy,
Your raped n snapped like a “pen-cell”,ya verse n talent aint got 1 mi-nute simularity,
decent end...
preety good verse u had a decent flow a few good punches and was average with u'r creativeness...... not a bad verse..

Kid Bootlegging Is Illegal So Quit With The Boos(e)...
Cause With All Jokes Aside,Im Still Slightly Amused...
this was ok,

I Dont Surf The Net On Some Thug-Type Shit...
But Believe Pages' Get Popped-Up Whenever I Point & Click...
ummm?? weak..... i get it and its weak and stupid....

Focus Your Lenses Cuz Ya Not Seein The Big Pitcure...
Kid Ya Not Hittin Where It Hurts Even If Ya Keyin Wit Blisters...
set up line was ok the 2ed line was good....

No Need To Chalk The Body,Sten. Dusts Off Kills...
I Could Put My Text On Titties & Ya Still Wouldnt Feel My Skills...
set up was preety decent hit wasnt effective...

Ive Beaten This Dicks' Flows So When He's Done Itll Hurt To Shake...
We'll Recap After I Sink The 8th Like Golf Commercial Breaks...
not a bad ending decent...

u also had a preety good verse, u'r flow was decent, your punches was aight but u had a few dumb ones to me NO-DISRESPECT TO U its just my honest thought and u'r creativeness was average..

preety close one to call,
but imma go with DV8
for better punches,
close battle.... nice drops playa's....