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Old 07-27-08, 06:56 PM   #10
Kirk
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you been average, I still don't feel this whores worthy.
but he ALWAYS..
produces sick concepts..that he jus murders with whackness an poor wording.
Haha, not bad.

this faggot acts tough, an noone in his family is good.
an yeah he's a Fletcher,..his occupation usually has to do with him handling wood.
Eh, alright.

ya rusty n need to catch up..ya custom title won't be remembered good..
nicks always tryin to get up to date.....so why respect a penis that never could?
Hahahaha.

eager to go twenty..I got plenty that'll leave you scorching.
no need to Strech ya verse out - it'll be carried out on a Strecther with you shortly.
This was alright.

this fags the queerest, he knows the truth sucks..
cuz his idea of a Knapsack.. is gettin tired n restin his head on a dudes nuts.
Alright but coulda been worded better.

your no prize son, you'll be quick to die next..
cuz Nick'el assume he's worth alott..an end up only amountin to five cents.
Naaaah.

style can't compete with mine, it'll be viewed as bias.
that verse would ONLY Pacify ..... was actually opposed to using violence.
I like this one.

I'm throwin punches..so how's it lookin then.
IF Nick stands up for his Rights..it'll jus be to get knocked down by my Hook again.
Not bad.

cartoons paint a picture..facts state you ain't nothin bitch.
I shoot for the stars - all three or four circlin ya head while recoverin from my fistt.
Alright but worded shitty.

thinkin your important..while I jus laugh he's shakin..
cuz yeah Nick IS a king..this isn't a battle I consider it an assassination.
Nah, crappy.

vs.

^ ur fucking garbage son! But if ur gonna steal my style you hoe
at least keep it fresh n stop flippin wordplay I used OVER 2 years ago
Naaah.

ur nuthin but a fraud whore, now I put you up for the slaughter
a legend amongst his peers? & yet one push leaves him face down in the water
Ehhh, alright.

seriously bro, ur rep is a joke. u bring nuthin but losses where u from
& if u hit this site with some W’s.. it was followed by a .RAPVERSE.COM
Alright but coulda worded it better.

ur final against 2v was like a trip through the years, droppin lines in bunches
there was the 80’s vs. the 70’s, & then a trip to the 60’s to find lays punches
Alright, but again coulda been worded better.

plus, ya mom’s a fugly bitch.. if she was a whore she wudn’t make one cent
& YES! we know she’s on the game..
..coz her fat ass had to come as downloadable content
I thought this was stupid.

also, your girl tells me ur ass is straight pussy ‘n’ ur dick has zero clout
& you only stay hittin’ that ass at night until she fucking lays you out
Naaah.

nah, ure gay really..& never raisin ur game, so I’ll blaze ‘n’ rip
coz ur ass aint made a transition since ur boy tried to spice up ur relationship
Nah. But kinda made me smirk.

this guy’s secretly a scrawny nerd to, he ain’t ever set to maul
& if his skeletal frame was in the hood, he’s packin a scythe bringin death to all
Naaaaah.

^ never done drugs either, whilst me I pop the rare E’s
so tonight, if Lay picks E..
..its coz his skills are a myth & he likes to hang with fairies
Alright, but again... worded horribly.

now fuck predictions! everyone knows I’ll win coz I keep shit fresh ‘n’ recent
but I’m hopin you lay doubt this time coz at least he was halfway decent
Haha, alright.

This was a pretty close battle. Both verses were alright and you both had about the same amount of alright punches, but Lay's hit harder because he had pretty good wording on the majority of them. Nick, you had some decent concepts but the wording just threw off their direction. Lay, might wanna work on your consistency still. You got either really good lines, or really shitty ones. But, good battle guys, this could prolly go either way.

V/Lay.
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