damn papi ur shits always long..........lol...............but that was tight..........i gatta be honest i didnt read it all cos i knew a part .....structure cool......and flow cool......

ruff.......i feel ya verse but the first 2 lines didnt rhyme...and most of ya lines were long and some were short...........so it didnt really flow.........but its a coo verse

shy ya verse was ok...flow was ok too............gd gd

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