beat is lovely...can I have it please?


I like the grittiness in ur voice here...If you can keep that but make your voice more musical, you'll have a winning combination.



flow is good

I still feel you need to elevate your rhyming to take your flow to the next level


not bad dawg...not at all

just polish up that rhyming


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