ehh...I wouldn't post lyrics if I were you...too many hungry emcees out there


Dabatos...immediately, my problem with this is that you sound the same as in all your raps...You rap with the same pitch/key in every rap...Please homie, change that up...I'd like to hear what you'd sound like with a grittiness in your voice

your flow is good though, if not standard

You need to start doing your own hooks as well...Almost every track you're on has a pre-packaged hook

Up your game dawg

Right now, RV is hot with audio...and you're basically at the bottom of that pecking order with this effort

Oh...and writing "personal" lyrics doesn't excuse mediocrity...

I used to love your raps...But, bro, come on! Step ya --ish up or get steam rolled.


As for this song's overall presentation, it was decent. It wasn't a bad song. I just know you can come with so much more.



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