Dude, there's no real rythem in this.....ok, when that cookoo clock thing stops it's got a simple loop. Dude, the hook is horrible.....lol. The melody is OK, but you can't just let it loop through the whole song cause it gets annoying. You should use what you have for your verse spots as your hook and kill some of the melody for the actual verse spots.....I hope you know what I'm talking about, cause I think I might have lost myself there a bit....lol

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