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05-31-07, 01:46 PM
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Lay.
don't try.
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Ah whats up Ran,
this was a descen piece,..I was feelin it..ya need to work on ya structure n some better vocab,..but overrall it was prety good. Keep writing
theres plenty of fish n the sea nikka
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