Well, i shouldn't have to go to those pieces just to see if you left feed on those pieces i'll check'em out later and if you didn't i'll close this and anything else you drop for 3 months.

But feed wise, wasn't really impressed by the flow nor the word choice, plenty of vivid imagry to a certain extent so not bad on that, emotion could've been basic but the structure really fucks the piece up visually, could've been alot better but i understand its from your phone so props for that.

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