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Old 01-02-04, 01:56 PM   #2
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This was pretty good, your flow and rhyme scheme fell off at points but you had some good multies and explinations, some wise choices of wordplay i think you did a good job on this but it could be fixed a little.

Good Work.

If ye got time drop some feed back on my stuff thanks.

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