another close one. both had CRAZY imagery, great ideas expressed, strong vocab, originality...

but i have to give this to n-demik for the following lines:

"Its like learning to walk, then talk back, Persians learning to steal"

"But he isn't looking back...In fact thats the freeze frame forever seen
from your broken parents dream, as your grubby nails unpicked the seams"

"There is a little tyrant inside of us all... trying to escape!!!!!!"

"Im only finding high spirits in liquor cabinets,"

vote- N-demik

you got nothing to be ashamed of understatment. good work from both of you.