im feelin this beat. real cool and mellow

lyrics are real nice. kinda caught me off guard with what you were saying. didnt know that this was what you rapped about. the only thing i can say about the lyrics is that the rhyming is real simple. like down, clown, brown. that kinda stuff

flow was on for the most part..you did fall off at a few spots but it wasnt that bad. try to switch it up a little. i been working on that myself. but after a while the same flow gets boring.

as for the emotion on the track, it was cool. it just kinda sounded like you were whispering. i dont know if thats what you were going for but after that ying yang twins whisper song came out, i hate the idea of that.



basically this is probably the best track i heard you on. you're definitely improving, but then again theres things that you need to work on. just like the rest of us. keep working at it.