Okay ever since I copped this beat everybody been using it lol...wow u filtered the shit outta ya lyrics that drowning sound to ya vocals is a clear overlimiting/overfiltering sign...ok ya flow gets better am better with every track...u over dragging out sum words cuz ya line structure falls short sometimes...u need to vary ya rhyme scheme an rhythms more...I like what u talking about lyrically..I feel ya religious focus...but ya repetitive flow...an your non-separate hook make the song drag...sonically it wears on the ears to listen to the same tone an rhythm for 3 plus mins...you'd lose alot of listeners after the first 30 seconds....delivery was good but again to repitious u didn't really vary the tone...ya quality took away from ya delivery as well so dont take that critique too far cuz the quality took off alot...beat choice was ill I love this beat, also lyrical focus was nice..I'm not use to u spitting about something which is a nice switch around

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