ok im lovin this beat. what i dont like is, w/e effect it is your using is drowning out the vocals. also i see you got the layed back thing goin on but you almost sound sleepy. u still need more support n emotion in your voice even though your sorta wispering. hmmm, change up ya rhyme scheme some too lol im feelin the message though. the lyrics n everything, somethin alot of people can relate to. still got a sexy voice, iunno why but i love your accent lol

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