vote goes to Anxiety...

quite a different approach from both of yall not that much emotion except one was first person(Anxiety) and one was kinda a informative on death(Drama)vote was really close but i gotta go with anxiety because it was first person it had a little more emotion but that was it id say a .5 better than Drama

Drama
liked your piece how you used imagery, emotion, and good vocab kinda telling the reader about life and death, you also gave the reader some insight on what to do...but i think it was lacking the emotion because you took this view...good vocab n structure... 7/10 favorite line :
Obstacles are never forgotten,just like open wounds and aching scars
Time is a luxury that is not ours,so little time to reach the stars

Anxiety
liked your piece alittle better because it was first person and had a little more emotion...you had good imagry, structure, n vocab...You kinda belittled death as a topic expressin your opinion liked that but it coulda used a little more complexity...good job i gave ya a 7.5/10 favorite line:
What scares me, is the uncertainty of what lies beyond...
What will be there to greet me when I am finally gone?

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