this was VERY basic...and yu structure is fucked lol..here is how you should post btw...its easier

My rymes are promised tighter than a fat head with cornrows
only the lord knows, come striaght at ya face wit hard blows
(whoa!) do you whats in my future when it unfolds
my name success for a reason achievin evry one of my goals
can't preform on stage mike'll melt cuz im so hot
leave you like my nike have your tongue in fuckin knots
I can make pankaces all I need is a piar of boots
watch out you could be the one I'm scrapin of my shoes

and elevate...use more vocab, multis and rearrange your wordply to get the mostof your bars...return the favor on my sig's links

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