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Old 06-02-04, 10:43 PM   #27
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PoLiFick: 6/10
Your Verse Had Sum Pretty Hard Punches and Your Metaphors Were Nice. Flow Was ALright and You Didn't Have Many Mulits. I Liked The Mortal Kombat Line..Word Usuage You Coulda Improved On...Nice Verse Overall.

M-Section: 5/10
You Had Sum Filler Lines and Man Those Last Two Bars Killed You...They Were Horrible and Made Your Spit Shit At The End. You Had Sum Decent Punches Threwout The Verse...Nice Wordusuage..But Vocab and Metas Need Work. Nice Verse Overall.

Vote - PoLiFick Due To Better Punches and Metaphors

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