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Old 10-14-04, 01:18 PM   #6
Efusive
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Raphael...

I'll "cruise by you as if I had a turbo jet cart"...
You "gassed yourself up and you still can't get past the start"!!...
played.
Even if you waxed the clean, you're rhymes wouldn't shine worth shit...
And hanging out in "Dirty Beans" won't help you have "ill spits"!...
could of been good...horrible wording bad setup.
Reading your verses is as fun as watching overwatered watching plants grow...
Don't be hyped up for this battle you couldn't even "flow in slow-mo"!!...
punch worded bad setup was bad as well...could of been better.
I'll "toss and turn" you, like my garden ceaser salad...
You don't stand a chance vs. me,like challenging a bard to sing out "balads"!
No.

sdizzle...

im schooling this kid and there arent any classes
hes the number one goal.... for rv target practice
weak
hes the type of kid
that moms really want to go play in traffic
shit.. his crew is very definition of wackness
old.
this fags a little kid, and he still packs lunches
only quotes he knows goes around his wack punches
ok
well u can suck my cock, atleast that way u'd gain fame
hypocrit... silly bitch sporting a sig confronting bad names
ehh.

sdizzle wins for a better overall verse and harder personals/punches.
raphael came strectched and played as well and used to many of these,
"*''", dizzle came played to but less then raphael.
overall this was a weak battle...dizzle wins with a better verse.

V/ sdizzle

Returnt the favor and vote on my battle...or i will be forced to edit.
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