Marvel, your first verse was not god enuff, it was very wise of you to put on different one which was alot better because it could be read.
Even with this in mind i have hand this one to The Evil one. No wonder he's called the bomb squad; he defused you bomb, no hassle.
Evel, you took this from the first verse coz you said exctly what i was thinking when i read Jamie's post, i.e.
"a quick shun to the guy whose name i forgot when i set thread
how Ill is you, when Jamie had to cheerlead your check in instead"
Evil had better structure and harder punches too.
Breakdown:
Opener-evilbombsquad
structure-evil bombsquad
metas-Marvel(tried a few)
Closer-Evil(marvel didn't make sense at the end)

And by the way approaching plane dont elevate!

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