Nice concept you worked with here, don't think I have seen it being used before on RV. Both had nice pieces, Atticus picked up pace bit more but he had more opportunity to show his talent of course. I was feeling the imagery of course, especially in chorus and the emotion was strong and pure. Was feeling the flow and had some insightful lines in there that made me think about shit

For instance:

Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's", Never Dones Continue To Run
Through A Life Of Light Blind To Strive With Eyes Fused Up.
^nice lines...

Keep it up boys and rtf on my open mic please (link in sig)...

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