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Old 10-10-04, 07:17 PM   #15
40z
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LOL at the beef... Both were pretty lame...

Um... First of all, SubtleTee, stop separating your bars like that, make it a block verse, it helps in some way, trust me. Vango, stop capitalizing the last word of your lines, looks wack, and color is wack too to me, I'd leave it black.

That being said, Vango had slightly better conepts in there, but like I said, both were weak. This was a battle with statements against oyur opponent, not actual punches, which are important in a tourney. Anyways, yea, Vango won, even tho he should be killed for using played Casper punches and that stupid "always next year" closer. But yea, Subtle Tee, he just outdid you.

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