beat is coo

1st verse...flow is on...doesn't waiver much
Lyrics didn't catch my attention too much though


2nd verse...need more highs in vocals to match sound quality of 1st verse...flow is comparable...good

again...my mind wandered though...

not much in ur lyrics or delivery that's eye popping


is that a hook after the 2nd verse?...


iz coo


3rd verse...very good attempt at rhyming...but this track is missing a point

it's like yall are rapping but it's not hookin me


and this is a good sounding track...it's just not jumpin off


iono...

not bad tho fellas

P.S. all yall sound 16/17



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"