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Old 05-08-05, 01:22 PM   #15
Dabatos
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Emotion- Well with the jealous and anger you could feel in flows verse.. i'd have to say that he got this..

creativity- both of ya came with alot of creativity in this one... but flow had to get this one as well with his very big twist at the end... good job

imagintion-flow.. with your very amazing word usage in this.. you were able to use ur imagery and make me feel im right by ur side in this one

vocabulary- well as we all could see.. hells fire took this.. alot of us vets arn't that great with vocab.. but we nailed emotion and imagery skill.. but flow has good vocab in many of his verses.. but in this one it didn't matter.. because i could feel alot of emotion.. and that matters alot...

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