damn man, 'ya turned me to peter pan'*** rockin wit this 'shadow of mine//'
face-it when tha 'heart monitor stops' be tha only time u droppin 'staright lines'//

Best line. The structure needs work like duke said but it was decent. Not the best but not the worst. Keep banging homy.

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