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Old 08-23-04, 01:11 AM   #11
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Aight Enygma You Surprised Me Here...You Came Harder Than I Thought You Would. Nice Vocabulary and Word Usuage Threwout Your Verse. Rhyme Scheme and Structure Was Off but Your Emotion and Vocabulary Helped You Out. Overall Nice Drop.

Ingenius Mind You Came A Little Wack For All The Hype Peeps Was Giving You. You Need To Elevate On Structure, Vocab, and Word Usuage. Just Get That Together...Along With Creativity and You'll Do Well.

Vote - Enygma

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