not bad, most important thing you was how you delivered it, and you sounded pissed off. the beats were good and shit, yup. to be honest the lyrics on the first verse were decent but they weren't that witty. More simplitic until you had hit the 2nd beat, got a lil better. Your flow was strong fa sure, nice job. The 3rd beat seems to slow man, your flow sounded mad off cuz it was so flow. overall hard diss, nice job.

can you rtf here please: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...904#post2765904

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