You the 1st kid smashed this shit wide open... everything after him didn't match the heat... the 2nd guy came the worst imo... to many unneeded syllables there really was no reason to spark everyline with yall, your or we... if the subject charater hasn't changed you need not remind the reader... exspecially every figgin' line... you came aight in that last verse... but ya structures all kinds of fucked up... 1st dude brought the most heat though... with the best flow, and interlocking rhymes... RTF & peep some of that MC shit posted up in here

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