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Old 01-26-05, 03:28 PM   #10
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Goes to Hells Fire of course due to no-show...

Let me give you some feedback though...first thing I thought when I saw your verse: daaaaaamn, this is fucking long! But I started reading anyway, expecting it to be dull as fuck but you managed to keep me focussed throughout the whole thing! (big props for that). Liked your approach, vocab was nicely balance between complex and basic and was feeling the flow. Had nice emotion in there and also good imagery...

Sorry for this no-show man, sucks big time indeed!

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