ya crews whack dude,..ya suck n don't hate when I kill cowards
so when I break the bridge of ya rap,..the one in London will cower
weak start...
originality?..name sucks n is whack, so I'll leave these gays blazed
cuz use Gap,n ya original name is nothin more than a played phrase
nah...
lol..to easy, ya mom sucks ma dick so simply she gives this vet dome
cuz cowhide aint a material,..its what I tell his mom when G gets home
aight...
you got no skill..but alot of posts, so I guess thats your sole curse
ya didnt' make the deadline,..< n that plural sum's up ya whole verse!
aight...
ya need to rethink battlin,..I can tell ya ain't gettin better from ya game
cuz u coudlnt' be 'ill'...if ya removed the rest of the letters from ya name!
nice ending...

the ending was ya best line.. the begining really was weak but you picked it up...






Lay Fear your not richboy he's hated more then a snitch...
So wit' ya name you might as well throw a d in dat bitch... LaDy Fear!
eeh but ok...
...Your perfect record on RapVerse you just blown it...
Ya gettin owned kid...
Lay Fear the only thing you run is away from your opponents...
eeh...
I'll twist up your name...
Leavin' voters laf 4 yearz...
...you just have a small buzz like half a beer...
aight...
Talk about me not bein' ill?.. homie this is pure game...
Your lame, the letter L is the only thing truthful in ya name...
understand what ya did.. but maybe you need it better wording but i wasnt feeling it...

This meals begun...Lay steals for fun...
Above me the 8 Mile Quote the only thing clever he wrote...
I got steal lungz, so verse this herb I will never choke...
3 line for a punch eeh streched... but aight punch
Ima end your shit, He's weak when he SENs a hit,
Got Lay like mighty duck, then I might win the championship...
I'm lappin' him quick....
nah..
And he's lays so you know ima eat more then one...
Even in a car race...
A punch fear could never fourmula one...
decent ending...


sadly gkillah if ya verse wasnt so up's and down with punches and streched line you would of got my vote...
but your verse was all ova the place at times you did aight then next bar was like WTF?? no hate man but i think lay fear got you on this one for more consistent verse....

lay fear by a hair....

vote: lay fear