Rev and DQ. lines werent stretched, good flow and vocab. Would like to see more emotion. your imagery was on point aswell. For the most part the piece was dope.

nothing much to say about it.

Spek and Ysdat......... I'm left speechless. I can tell you two didnt have good contact in that 1 did you? vocab was good. All else was bad. Structure, imagery, emotion was all not that well guys. If ya'll woulda put the full efort into this you may have had a chance.

\V/ - Rev and DQ

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